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Post  bibibonbon158 on Tue Sep 20, 2011 11:34 pm

Topic : PUNCTUALITY
Unpunctuality seems a common thing of Vietnamese. Some people claim that it is a part of Vietnamese charm while i strongly believe that it is latent dangerous disease.

It is argued that, first, if coming late, you are polite person . The possibility is that as a result of embedding the habit, we don't show our greed or some kinds of that, particulally in parties, where it is expected to come late at least 10 to 15 minutes while host can prepare one painstakingly. However, it is undeniable that hardly can school's rule be tightened due to uncontrollable students' unpunctuality, which also shows lack of respect to public. Another point is that little can students master their teacher's lessons as a consequence of so-called traffic jams . Put it seemly, instead of politeness, such guys are considered as public saboteur.

The second advantage of unpunctuality is believed to exhibit the creative habit of Vietnamese. The chance is that kids adapt to new surroundings quickly such as studying abroad thanks to applying this habit ''being flexible'', which derives from their parents, to every aspects of life . Paradoxcially, so flexible are they that children do thinks on their whim , break traffic laws and don't follow plan. Besides, by dint of our behindhand in international meetings, Vietnam's economy compared to others is always behind times. In other words, every creativity comes from rule, before '' Rule is learnt to be broken'' , you should obey it - punctuality.

In conclusion, despite inculcation of culture in our mind, it is also only habit, which we do in the long run and therefore we can absolutely change.

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Re: topic Punctuality

Post  kurapika312 on Thu Sep 22, 2011 11:50 am

bibibonbon158 wrote:Topic : PUNCTUALITY
Unpunctuality seems a common thing of (OF->IN) Vietnam. Some people claim that it is a (NO "A" HERE) part of Vietnamese charm while i strongly believe that it is latent dangerous disease.

It is argued that, first, if coming late, you are A polite person . The possibility is that as a result of embedding the habit, we don't show our greed or some kinds of that, particulally in parties, where it is expected to come late at least 10 to 15 minutes while (THE) host can prepare one painstakingly (THIS SENTENCE IS A BIT LENGTHY) . However, it is undeniable that hardly can school's rule be tightened due to uncontrollable students' unpunctuality, which also shows lack of respect to public. Another point is that little can students master their teacher's lessons as a consequence of so-called traffic jams . Put it seemly(OR SIMPLY?) , instead of politeness (BEING POLITE) , such guys are considered as public saboteur.

The second POSSIBLE advantage of unpunctuality is believed (-> EMPTY) to exhibit the creative habit of Vietnamese. The chance is that kids adapt to new surroundings quickly such as studying abroad thanks to applying this habit ( THANKS TO THE HABIT OF) ''being flexible'', which derives from their parents, to every aspects of life . ParadoxIcally, so flexible are they that children do thinks on their whim , break traffic laws and don't follow plan. Besides, by dint of our behindhand in international meetings, Vietnam's economy compared to others is always behind times (WHAT DOES THIS MEAN?) . In other words, every creativity comes from rule, before '' Rule is learnt to be broken'' , you should obey it - punctuality.

In conclusion, despite inculcation of culture in our mind, it is also only habit, which we do in the long run (SHOULD LEAVE THIS ONE OUT) and therefore we can absolutely change.


Nice job tomato. You're improving much faster. :X
Sorry, I forgot one thing: if you are practising writing IELTS, then you should reduce the frequency of using "subjective" subjects like we,I...or even you. He, she, those, ones.... are preferable.


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Post  bibibonbon158 on Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:50 pm

Besides, by dint of our coming late in international meetings, that Vietnam's economy compared to others is behind times is understandable.
Does it have meaning? bounce
^^ like writing thanks to ur comment

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